Kia ora bloggers hope you had a good day today and hope your day went good so far.
This week me and my class have been learning about first person and third person. To those that don’t know what first person and third person is, First person is the narrator who wrote the story and the story was made by them, Third person is a person who writes a story based in their own point of view.
So here’s my story of Goldilocks just to let you know I haven’t finished my story yet so if you have any suggestion for me to add on my story please comet down below even if u have a questions.
My Goldilocks
I was out walking looking for berries for my pancakes. When I stumbled across
an old rustic cottage, with the door swinging open. I knocked, rat a tat tat. No one
replied. I got worried, “Who would leave the door open and not be home?
I thought to myself. I quickly entered the cottage to check everyone was okay. I know CPR.
Cautiously entering the house hearing nothing but the wind howling and the door swung open and shut, but the corner of my eye seeing a table full of lovely delightful food, It had waffles, roast chicken, ice cream, fruits in multi bowls and more delightful food slowly getting distracted as I heard a thump a massive one it sounded like someone just fell of the bed. I panicked and ran like there was something trying to kill me. Straight away I saw a child lying on the ground, my heart beating almost forgetting what I knew about CPR. As I ran up to that kid I remembered that I needed to stay calm, he had a concussion.
I tried and tried to help him and my heart sank when I knew I couldn’t help that little boy, I couldn’t help myself but break into tears of waterfalls.As I heard his squeaky voice it hurt me the most that I wasn’t there earlier to help him through it.